Thursday, August 23, 2007

Not a closed case, Not yet

She had this gaze...much like the hackneyed birds of prey,
Her ambiance was bewitching...much like a charmed one,
All the soulful songs jammed my head in her presence,
Inspiring love, love once alive, she left me petrified,

I preferred a bird's eye view of the extreme beauty,
She cherished her own company, thin suites her favorite,
Her hair-style seemed like a complement to her lifestyle,
Every step in her walk seemed a complex math, only her solved,

Her life she held in high esteem, keeping me far at bay,
She fed me fantasies, my guts could not swallow her pride,
I still preferred a bird's eye view, of a body exquisite,
There are some sweet things, i say, that are better not tasted,

Somethings too i would love to keep as secrets, myself to bury,
Her world she clouded with mystery, her beauty with a smile,
I just wish i knew her secrets, hoping against all hope,
That way i would know her weakness, her mystery...demystified.

8 comments:

BrokenStreetLight said...

u falling in love?

gautami tripathy said...

Love gives us freedom, it bindsus, it gives us joy, it petrfies us..

I enjoye reading this poem.

gautami tripathy said...

*enjoyed

Tumblewords: said...

nice, oh, nice!

Anonymous said...

I love the bird motif. This is definitely a sexy little number!

Anthony said...

@boyflani, am trying not to,but it seems like it got more power than me!
@all,mad thanx for the love. its good to demystify love at times!

Unknown said...

Somethings too i would love to keep as secrets, myself to bury,
Her world she clouded with mystery, her beauty with a smile,
I just wish i knew her secrets, hoping against all hope,
That way i would know her weakness, her mystery...demystified.


oh yeah this is me alright

Anthony said...

@KIPUSA, really? Coz if so then u must be the mystery woman who inspired me to jot the poem!